ख़्वाब ख़ुशबू के घर में रहते हैं: शीन काफ़ निज़ाम
ग़ज़लवो कहाँ चश्मे-तर में रहते हैं शहर का हाल जा के उनसे पूछ मौसमों के मकान सूने हैं अक्स हैं उनके आस्मानों पर हमने देखा है दोस्तों को ‘निज़ाम’ |
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आस्मान मख़्तूता[1]आस्मां है कि कोई मख़्तूता |
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पत्ते पेड़ और पहाड़रात आये |
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आमद[2]घर आँख – अंधों को आ गए? |
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तुम कहाँ होशाहराहों पर तुम्हारा परिंदे की पर सुकूं मिलता नहीं है सच हुआ है शाप तो सच हो गया लेकिन दर-ब-दर कब तक फिरेगी |
Notes
[1] हस्तलिखित पाण्डुलिपि
[2] आगमन
[3] सवेरा
[4] फल
[5] प्रातःकालीन हवा
[6] सहजन्मा, सहजात
[7] आर्तनाद
[8] मूर्त रूपों
[9] शांति
[10] एक काल्पनिक पक्षी, एक नायाब वस्तु, अनस्तित्व का इश्तिहारा
I am very much impressed by the poetry of Janab Sheen Kaaf Nizam. I would like to have more of his hindi transliterations.
Arun Kumar
I appreciate the efforts by Mr. Giriraj Kiradoo and his friends; his love and dedication for hindi and urdu poetry is something to praise.
I am thankful to the efforts by Mr. Giriraj Kiradoo and his friends. I am a big fan of mr. sheen kaaf nizam and would liked to have more of his transliterations. The great thing about him is his poetry is it touches the heart and thats why the person who is not related to urdu also remember his sher and thats what makes him a great poet.
vineet purohit
निज़ाम साहब को पढता-सुनता रहा हूं . उन्हें ‘प्रतिलिपि’ में देखकर अच्छा लगा .
I respect him, miss him as I have tried to be his student but could not prove myself to be one..he is just great no one can be better than him
I get lots of inspiration while listening him / reading ….probably my new thoughts came out from his words..
baziyaan koi lakh lagayeh toh kya
tujh se jeet payega kaise
hamara toh hai mansoobaH hi harnee ka
koi bhalaH hame khilyeH bhi toh kaise….
I mat with Nizaam Sahab 24th march 2009, jaipur at mandeleshwer mahadev mandir, unki shakshityat ko dhekhkar Ek Shair ka sher yaad aya,
yeh mana aadmi mein phool jaise hi rang hai,
tehjeeb ki khushboo to muhabaat se hi aati hai…..
nice to see nizam saheb at pritilipi.
yesterday i heard respected Nizam Sahib in Lions Club Jodhpur and really want to salute his poetry and his thoughts for a common man and knew the diffrenciation of ishq.
Well, What should I say about Nizam shahib, I am speech less to express my feeling about this greates poet. No one can describe this legendary person in words. he is a precious gift of god which should always be in light.
and it is my pleasure that I have met him & he had guided me for my speech competition, where I got First Prize. Finally, I want to coclude with my favourite sher of Nizam Sahib that :-
तू जब से बाहर निकला है ,
सारा शहर ग़ज़ल कहता है !!
एक हसीं चेहरे का होना,
शहर का हुस्न बढा देता है !!!
शहर-ए-आफताब जोधपुर की शान और पहचान बन चुके शीन काफ़ निज़ाम को केंद्रीय साहित्य अकादमी अवार्ड – 2010 (उर्दू पोएट्री) मिलना, और राजस्थान में पहली बार मिलना बतौर शाइर उनके कद को रेखांकित करता है. निज़ाम साहिब की सन्निधि और आशीर्वाद से मै गर्वित हूँ.
ab maloom hua,jodhpur mahkta kyo hai.